Thursday, August 27, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Sophia,
ReplyDeleteI loved reading this writing. It actually made me feel really calm. I think it is because of the words (language) you used, like fluffy, gliding and calm.
Have you thought of adding to this story? Maybe you could point out some of the language features (like similes, conjunctions, adjectives etc) that you have used by highlighting or adding an arrow and a little label.
Have a great day
Mrs M