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Friday, June 12, 2020

The magic puppet by Sophia

hi this is the story of a poor man and his girl 
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  1. AnonymousJune 17, 2020 at 11:50 AM

    Hi Sophia,
    I love this! The language that you have used really paints a clear picture in my mind. Examples of this are 'rich people strutting by', 'thunder struck the sky like fireworks exploding everywhere' and 'glowing door'. I wonder if you are going to write the next chapter of your story. Remember, the movie is on the site if you want to.
    Mrs McIntyre

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